Sunday, August 10, 2008
Limerick 1. House of V
The House of V hosts a large spider
Who could be called, perhaps, a rough rider.
He seems so docile
Then gets incredibly vile
And puts parts of himelf inside ya.
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Little Miss Muffet sat on a tuffet,
Eating her curds and whey,
Along came a spider who sat down beside her,
And frightened the living s**t out of her by trying to put his spider bits inside her.
The proper limerick form rhymes the third and fourth lines and follows a common meter. (The final rhyme is often tortured, as you did so well...)
Perhaps this would do the trick:
The House of V hosts a large spider
Who could maybe be a rough rider.
Though he seems quite docile
Almost a fossil
Watch out or he'll end up inside ya!
Thanks Emerald! I'd say the entire poem is pretty much tortured - and instead of being a proper one it's just an improper one :)!
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